That kick is the original kick for FL, try using a different kick, there are plenty of others included with FL for free. Almost not loud enough. But thse are the negitives. You really have some potential and I'll watch for your next submission. If you're bored, check out my newest song... Peace.
yah i know, it was like, 4am when i finished this. and i decided to make a song that was slow and tired.