For a Hardcore-styled track, the composition for it is pretty solid. Did you possibly use Ohmicide or NI Driver for Distorting your kicks with?
My main gripe with the track is mainly that it sounds like it needs Equalising alittle better on the higher end, I'm hearing hearing of hissing/crunching noise from the track through my ADAM's, have you possibly considered going over it with a DeEsser at all? I do feel like a little bit more bass is needed in your kicks as well to drive the track even more.
Anyway, that's my observation and I would like to say well done on the track and I hope to see more from you in the future!