Where to begin... The snare that appears at the intro is a little too loud and hurts my ears. Perhaps tone it down just a couple decibels. Everything else in this song is amazing and I'm in love. The crowd that you transition to was an awesome idea. Haven't really heard anything like that before. I like the bass you use in the beginning and the other basses that you use for other parts of the song. The piano from the intro that you use was a great hook, as it actually hooked me to listen to the rest of the song. And thank god for that, it's definitely a great work of art. Other than the snare in the intro, there are no other problems to this song and I'd say you have something great going on. Good job!