Completely like every single part of this song EXCEPT just one aspect... The bass in some parts of the song overpowers everything else and makes the volume of other instruments lower just a little bit, distorting them just a little bit. If it weren't for headphones, I definitely would not have picked that up. This issue is an easy fix, and for that, it's not too unappealing to me and won't really affect my final vote. Another issue I have, that's not necessarily a bad one, is that this is far too short! Why is that!? I was enjoying the flow of the song and then all of a sudden, BAM, over. Anyways, onto the great things that you did with this. The vocal that you used for the transition really got my attention and hooked me to the song. The beat to the song is great too. Reminds me of a song for an old 16 bit game on the Sega Genesis or something. Like Sonic I guess, haha. Awesome song!
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Check out my revised version, Ardious. Same song essentially, but the new one sounds... well listen for yourself and tell me!
RATE after you've listened a bit so I know how I'm doing. You can't really judge this based off of the first 13 seconds, I decided to go with an older sound for this one, older styles are more my forte. More of a video game sound, tried to go with the flow writing this one yesterday, and it seems that I've captured my thoughts quite well. Probably the shortest amount of time I've spent writing a song, but still one of my favorites I've made so far.
VERY open to constructive comments, if you give me a low rating without saying anything, I'll have no idea what to work on!
Welcome to my thoughts, more to come ~M~
Thanks for the tips, do you know a way to fix the bass distortion without turning that track down? I like the bass to it but I heard that too, didn't think anyone would notice lol. As for the length I'll be posting a longer version once i can figure out something else to do to it, starting to sound a little repetitive to me but it could be just from listening to it a bunch of times while I was making it. To extend it would people like yourself like to hear more of that beat repeated with maybe a new backround, or a new harmony or brand new melody that goes with the bass line or something like that? When i finished it and listened more it reminded me personally of how the songs from the batman gameboy game way back in the day sounded lol. Once again thanks for your help, I'll be looking forward to hearing back from you again
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