I really liked the intro but then the synth that came in at 40 seconds just doesn't really appeal to me. To me, I think it's the tone of the synth that doesn't sound really good. However, after the arp comes in later, that synth that I was talking about before really does start to sound good. So I think, a good way of fixing this whole problem would probably be having the arp come in first and then transition to the synth playing at the same time as the arp and then like you did in the song, have the arp stop playing and the synth continue to play. Haha, I'm going to go onto another topic because I don't want this review to be specifically just on one thing... I really like what you did with this. It definitely has that horror feeling to it that I love. The drum beat was amazing throughout the entire song, but some diversity in the beat would be nice. I am not going to complain about that though, it's not that big of a deal. As I'm getting to the end of the song now, I have one last thing to comment on. The actual conclusion of the song definitely should have been different instead of literally just a kick and then Bam, end... I think what you should have done is had the song fade out as a whole rather than just ending it with kicks. In all, this song has some good motivation, it just needs a little help and some fixing.