Maybe it's just me, but I really feel strongly that a lot of this is just pure randomness. The intro I am not really liking the offbeat kicks, they feel really out of place. Some of notes I can't really tell if they're in the right scale that you're using. Some sound out of tune. I will say that I like the transition into the second part of the song and then into the ending. But I've still got to say, it really does sound like pure randomness. The final verdict? I like it, but with the few flaws that I've uncovered... this piece really needs some work to make it great. Now that I see in one of your tags that it says horror, I definitely feel that effect. Bonus points to my vote then I suppose, haha.