a song about how i would feel in a nuclear apocalypse.
the time has come and its my turn to die
but i don't want to leave without saying goodbye
while mushroom clouds they light up our sky
il be by your side when the bombs start to fly
so we'll stand our ground while the rest of them flee
you were the worst best thing that could happen to me
now my friends and my family forever estranged
but i gaze in your eyes and I'm glad that i stayed
when alls said and done and all tries have been tried
all that is left is to die by your side
i fought like a soldier to keep you from harm
all i want now is to die in your arms
so when the world ends and death sings his tune
the last words that you'll hear are i'll always love
the last words you'll hear are i'll always love you
It's a very well written song, but i whant to hear more of you'r voice. So if you could turn down the piano playing and let you'r voice out some more. I like how you put some more power at the end in the last sentence. I give you 4 stars for it :)
Great work anyways! Keep it up
thanks very much, i appreciate the tips, I'm always on the lookout for advice, il take it onboard and give it a little remix soon, also expect more stripped down piano stuff soon if you enjoyed it, i write pretty much everything on piano these days, but then when it comes to recording i have to change to synth stuff because midi pianos sounds like children's toys and i struggle playing real piano to a metronome, and by doing this my songs lose a lot of their oomph (even if they do gain an element of funkiness) thanks again
:'(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
jambrother2 
