Great job man ! ..
i think you to do some changes in this song.. try to do a format.. like, intro, vocals, melody and this stuff.. this looks like a demo.. like they said, try to down the vocal volume.. and keep greating..
To the person underneath me, they're an asshole... Really? They vote a zero just because of one flaw and an opinion at that. Alright, onto the review then. I've got to say... I do agree that the vocals just don't really seem like they should be on a song like this. They also seemed to overpower the song a little too much, maybe bring the volume down 3 decibels. The melody... oh man, do I love that melody! It left me craving more when the song faded out in the end. Is this a work in progress, or are you leaving it at this? One last thing... next time you make a song, do not use the default kick, clap, hat, and snare. It takes away from the originality. Not too big of a deal, but just throwing that out there. In all? A great piece of work with mild flaws.
Melody is cool, singing is a pain in the ass.