it sounds like you're still learning how to use FL so i'll be gentle (sort of)
the different bass synths that play together are out of key, the crash sample doesn't really fit with the kick/snare basic samples. needs more interesting percussion elements and syncopation (i.e. percussion not just hitting on the beat)
oh, but i like the little lasery sound on the off-beat. maybe you could try to make some more minimal acid/electro style stuff?
I think that's the right amount of cruelty. I really need to read into percussion theory, I'm flying blind on that part.
I got the offbeat idea from reading how a guy does his UK Hardcore. I enjoy playing with offbeats when I'm not overwhelmed.
Wow, this is actually pretty awesome sounding! But what's with the average score though? :\
Perhaps others don't agree. Thank you for the vote of confidence though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.