you lack good acting, really doesnt make me want to hire you since from this demo I dont think you would give a good performance.
Btw this is a conclusion of listening to both your demo's.
you should add more variety and get better at acting them out from the look of things
Short and sweet. Next time include more.
Good job. Although I would've loved to hear more!
Very nice! I liked how you did it the first time better, but very nice, JackJackington!
Thank you! Listening to it over I have noticed the second was a little unnatural sounding, I'll have to work on it a little.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.