i thought

i thought it was really good and the name is cool

This song sounds fair.

The beginning rythms are initially confusing each other. You might want to straighten them out a bit. I agree that the static is more of an initial distraction rather than a device to add diversity. The Vocoder effects were very great, good job in that respect. This might do well in the miscellaneous genre, not in techno. Good effort, but I would recommend focusing on diversifying melodies instead of abstract rythms.

nightvision

h,mm

well, i didnt care for it personally, it was to static in the rythm and the music. it didnt realy change much. but overall, it wasnt to bad