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My friend sang this with me. Lol my voice didnt work so well in this one....but itsok

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twas okay

The bass guitar was too strong in parts of the song, im all up for a loud bass guitar . . . but it was played pretty mediocrly(spelling?) in parts. The singing is alright, but it sounds like your holding back . . . dont. I think the lyrics were well written, and had a nice melody to them that fit in with the guitar nicely. Basically its a well written song, just not recorded very good my suggestion is to play it more and more and sing it more (even in the car or shower just belt it out) to build up your confidence in the song as it could be really great if preformed better

Ltblackshadow responds:

Yeh it was the first take. Me and my friend didnt have anymore time to finish up another take so it didnt work out. We just made a two person band for fun cause we hang out alot so might as well. We are originally in a band. But we recorded this at her house. Usually we have a recordin studio at our other friends house who has more "proffesional" set. But yeh thanks for the review. I really appreciate it =D

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Waiting for 5 more votes

Jul 15, 2006
2:35 AM EDT
General Rock
File Info
3.8 MB
4 min 8 sec

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