twas okay

The bass guitar was too strong in parts of the song, im all up for a loud bass guitar . . . but it was played pretty mediocrly(spelling?) in parts. The singing is alright, but it sounds like your holding back . . . dont. I think the lyrics were well written, and had a nice melody to them that fit in with the guitar nicely. Basically its a well written song, just not recorded very good my suggestion is to play it more and more and sing it more (even in the car or shower just belt it out) to build up your confidence in the song as it could be really great if preformed better