Wow. Seriously wow to that person who zero bombed this... seriously dude? ~__~ My 5 star only got it up to 2 average T__T Tried my best!
Anyways. From :00 to 1:00 ish, the repeating sequence of the chord progression with strings and layered bass and plucks was a nice progression to the build up theme. What I really suggest here is adding a bit more background noise - pluck arps, pads, etc. it feels empty at times, but I did really enjoy this section. As for the build up at around 1:05 - single kick hit into the bass dnb progression, that was a bit anticlimactic. Enjoyed your bass design, although it felt out of place after that nice chord progression from the beginning. Really enjoyed the change up around 2:00! Around 3 minutes when the themes coincide, there is a bit of clashing between your high saw hits and your original chord progression, and it only goes away when the bass from the first dnb drop comes back.
Overall, really interesting piece - I enjoyed that intro a lot! Keep it up my friend :)
All your good and bad points are handy.
You've helped me with this and I'll keep your points in mind if/when I make other mixes of the track.