Make It Longer
If you make it into a full song (3 mins. at least), I'll download it.
needs a little work.
i know it's your first, but it wasn't bad. it just needs a little fine tuning. with more practice, you will be doing better in no time! don't give up!
i liked it when i first made it because it was the best thing ive made so i really dident pay attention to it that much but its ok to me but i agree with u it could use some work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.