"Dj-Comet; Control Freak"
First Impression; He has some nice ideas going, I didn't really like the next synth you introduced; a bit because it destroyed the clarity picture; and a bit because of it being to low-fi; what synth are you using?
After a while; It got rather repetive; I believe you should have introduced more effects; and perhaps a keychange?
I also think you should have a deeper bass; as it sounded a bit thin overall.
Your breakbeats was simplistic; but fit the song just perfectly; nice job there.
You had alot of nice idea's going; if you could get the clarity a bit better; along with the picture of diversity; meaning introducing other foundational melodies.
The Ending was a normal volume drop; but worked rather effectively in this song.
Nice job at that part.
I'm rather new to this webpage; so if you could check out some of my Soundtrack/Orchestral works and leave a review; I'd be happy.
Best of wishes; Chris.