Hey I listened to some of your compositions, this one is probably my favourite they are all pretty good though, reminds me a lot of music that would be in an anime.
I really like the choice of chords, and how to song progresses, I would have added some other instruments as well, but you already spoke of not having to many other instruments at your disposal. Still really good, ill probably learn it heh, also we should definitely collab sometime, I really enjoy your composing style.
Hai :D thanks alot!! :D yeah, not having a lot of instruments is quite annoying.. :/ if you want to learn it, I can write the sheet if you wish so :)
And I would be really motivated to do a collab! :D it's something I've always wanted :D
Really solid song, i love the jazzy feel you've got going on throughout the piece!
Oh, thank you so much =D
Yeah, I've been inspired by jazzy chords :)
Wow, this sounds so much like anime music. I love it!
This piece would sound fantastic with more instrumentation. All those fast, repeated block chords in the piano could be replaced with or doubled by strings. A smooth electric bass would add so much warmth. A driving, syncopated drum-set part with some intricate cymbal work with propel the song forward rhythmically. Maybe some cool, mellow pads would add to the atmosphere...Oh, and rhythm guitar!
Anywho, this piece has some really nice chord progressions and melodies. I think the biggest problem is that it meanders quite a bit, wandering around in certain spots without a feeling of direction. Repeating specific melodic ideas and embellishing/developing them would help solve this.
Really nice. You've got talent! :D
thank you so much for your review!!! :D
Well, I've got a little problem... I have a piano with 8 instruments: 2 piano sounds, one electronic piano, a strings sound, a harpsichord, a church organ, and a voice sound. No drum, no guitar. That's the only thing I have xD I also have a violin, wich I recorded twice, in "forgotte love" and "the carousel of old times" (two other songs) So.. Yeah. That's not very much. I hope that one day, when I'll be older, I'll have the possibility to play more instruments and to learn how to use programs to make music. Thanks so much!! :D