I don't want you to feel offended, but I feel that you are better at dubstep.

Yeahah! Dishonered! Cool song man.

Hah I recognize that vocal, it's from Dishonored right? I remember downloading the stem pack for their remix contest.

As for the song it's a bit too "chill" for me but a good listen nonetheless. Always fun to explore new styles!

Love the intro.
I love the really creepy voices in it. It gets to you and its so cool.
I also like the hooks of the song, such as the cord and the drums going
together. I really like it. It could you use some inprovement. The transition could maybe
be a little bit slower? It would sound like a much more emotional song. I'd play this shit in
my furneral. lol. If you want this song on a flash move or game...add it to the credits. It would
be like mind-chilling ending. It would include lots of mindfuck. Nice song. You can do better I bet.
All you need fixed is transition.

~Wavepad~