Nice work, look forward to hearing the final edit!
Phonometrologist, notice how it says (WIP). Work in progress.
Thanks man!!! I'm taking more time to listen and produce my music. I value all your opinions
IF this is what you heard in your ear then it shouldn't matter what I think. However I will say this, I enjoyed the beginning but then the piece came to a point where I didn't know where you wanted to go with it.
Just realized that this works great as a loop! Get rid of the voice.
Thanks man!!! I know it's a little rough but I'm fixing it up!! Haha. And it sounds good to me but I want to make music that not only I like but others like. I enjoy bringing out the emotions through my music. :)