Good chord structures. Would have given a higher score for better use of the soundspace and mixing of percussion. Really could use with some type of FX on that at least -- and more high end. As is it feels pretty unimaginative and sticks out for just being the lamest part of an otherwise pretty alright track. Your retro instrumentation stands out far more than your strings as well, and structuring is repetitive. I don't like your string synth. Really, it's an alright, laid back track, but the wow factor isn't really there for me.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.