The first half's snares lack punch to me and near the end are a bit muffled or something, but I'm just getting those out the way: I really liked the overall piece and the all the effects and melodies.
The robotic noises and almost industrial sounds really give the track realism and theme. Great job I'd say. 4.5 here and 5 on the side so 4.75 in total.
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