This is a good track. The overall feel of it is very nice. I think that the drums seem too basic if that makes sense, and I would suggest maybe playing around a bit with different drum sounds for this song. It needs better quality drums though. An idea that comes to mind is to maybe use percussion more often used in orchestras? I'm thinking more lighter feeling drums (you can still have kick drum and snare I'm just throwing ideas out there). The piano also seems to be a little harsh compared to the softness of the rest of it (minus the drums), so maybe play around with filters for the piano to make it sound as soft as the rest of the track. Overall this is a really good track and the overall atmosphere of it fit together very nicely. The rest of the instruments are great together. ^^
You're a really inspired person. Every day I wake up with homework, year work and Releqium in my head.
The part around 1:30 reminds me of "The Broken Land" and "Second Breath" VERY much, as if this is another Fall of Arzo track.
It is kind of heightened and floating in the skies at the beginning of it, everywhere else it's exact Fall of Arzo mood - solemn emptiness.
This is a cinematic piece, of course.
I tried to play this between listening to broken land and second breath but I found no connection. :/
I love the cinematic attempt. Really awesome work. :)
Make me a full cinematic track based on this then. :D
If you want I will even give you dem FLP- :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.