I really like the quieter moments when you focused more on the orchestra instead of just emphasizing the synths and drums, I feel like that should be the main focus and build upon and work with those more complicated sections like how it starts around 50sec and on but a complete breakdown into chaos with tons of fast drums and high pitched synths can bring a welcome break. basically i felt like you came on strong and faded out and I think it would be better the other way but that's just my opinion, still I liked it keep it up