VAC 11 Judge Review:
Mustafa is one letter away from being a Star Wars planet! Anyways, very good. The biggest critique is that some ambient sound effects would have really really helped this entry stand out more. And to be even more nit picky, your enunciation was sloppy at times, or it just sounds like you have a bit of congestion. But, great distinct characters and acting. The story was a great idea to base off of the theme. The mood of this piece was interesting because it went from sort of comedic to more serious at the end, and I really liked that it ended with a serious tone. Not much else I can say except that lack of aesthetics with effects and music and whatnot. But, I know you know that since you were rushing. Great work!