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First Visit To The Future

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So after a lot of computer problems, such as a random crash I had a lot of problems with this one. I admit I could've done better on the script, and I wanted to put an effect on Mustafa's voice, but no time :P

Hope you all still enjoy it

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VAC 11 Judge Review:

Mustafa is one letter away from being a Star Wars planet! Anyways, very good. The biggest critique is that some ambient sound effects would have really really helped this entry stand out more. And to be even more nit picky, your enunciation was sloppy at times, or it just sounds like you have a bit of congestion. But, great distinct characters and acting. The story was a great idea to base off of the theme. The mood of this piece was interesting because it went from sort of comedic to more serious at the end, and I really liked that it ended with a serious tone. Not much else I can say except that lack of aesthetics with effects and music and whatnot. But, I know you know that since you were rushing. Great work!

I love the emotion you put into the "lingo" used by the first alien and the mixing you do with the SFX is exceptionally well done. The script is very humorous and enjoyable, good luck with your entry!

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Chongo
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Nov 15, 2013
11:53 PM EST
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5 min 28 sec
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