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My submission to Voice Acting Contest 11.

-- Oh my gosh! 1st place? Thank you so much to the judges! Wait, even my parents are proud of me? This is awesome! Thank you so much for everyone's continued support. It means the world to me. You guys are the best. You rock.

We accompany Jade, a popular thirteen-year-old honors student as she meets two hall monitors, Paige (10y) and Seth (9y), whose goal is to help get her out of a bind. However, she may have to break a few school rules. Can Jade make it out of her first time being caught without a hall pass?

All sound effects and music are either homemade (by me!) or from FREE SFX [freesfx.co.uk] "We are pleased to provide free sound effects and music to you!"

Thank you. :)


This is really well done. The voice is nice and clear and is easy to listen to. Great job and keep up the good work.

Piper responds:

Thank you, man! I'm happy you liked it. I will definitely keep it up. Also, hey, nice name. ;)

I have to say that only just recently have I joined the Newgrounds VO community and this is incredibly well done. I'll assume that you have done professional work? The story line is very reminiscent of Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya or definitely Clannad. I'm a professional actress in Seattle and hearing this, I mean, this might as well be one of the $1,500 demos created out here. Very impressive and definitely look into a career if you haven't already! I'd love to chat with you on your technique if you ever have a moment! 5 stars from Seattle!


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Piper responds:

Thank you so much for your review, Sarah! I hope to do professional work. I hope to do this for a career. I'm a bit flabbergasted right now that I placed first. Feel free to message me. I'll be very busy here in a few days but please, I'm always up for discussing VO stuff with others. It's my passion. Thanks again. What a lovely review!

this is cute Piper <3

this is a cute voice acting Audio
this rocks
keep it up
this awesome to enjoy this song

Food123 <3

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Piper responds:

Thank you! :)

Very nice..Indeed I mean its obvious you have potential I like you're voice and the voices that came with this amazing story line 5 stars from me to you on your behave ^ ^... You're a genius that's for sure.

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Piper responds:

Thank you for taking the time to review this! -and for the stars, of course! I'm glad that you liked the story and the voices! The characters really came to life for me, I'm so glad that people have enjoyed it! :)

Hilarious. I love it :D. I absolutely love the hall monitors' voices. Wonderful work. The ending was awesome twist, and I was keep wondering what happened to the hall pass? This is truly one of your best work. The part they were locked in the room is even more awesome. I love the tones of your voices, because they were so natural.

Well done 5/5, love the voices, love the story.

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Piper responds:

Thanks for such an enthusiastic and positive review! I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to show your support. You rock!

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4.26 / 5.00

Nov 15, 2013
5:16 PM EST
File Info
8.1 MB
5 min 54 sec

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