First Time Rule Breaker

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My submission to Voice Acting Contest 11.

-- Oh my gosh! 1st place? Thank you so much to the judges! Wait, even my parents are proud of me? This is awesome! Thank you so much for everyone's continued support. It means the world to me. You guys are the best. You rock.

We accompany Jade, a popular thirteen-year-old honors student as she meets two hall monitors, Paige (10y) and Seth (9y), whose goal is to help get her out of a bind. However, she may have to break a few school rules. Can Jade make it out of her first time being caught without a hall pass?

All sound effects and music are either homemade (by me!) or from FREE SFX [freesfx.co.uk] "We are pleased to provide free sound effects and music to you!"

Thank you. :)


This was wildly entertaining. I can't say I'm surprised, but this was very well done. I hope to see more stuff like this in the future.

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Piper responds:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

You're very talented at this, well done

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Piper responds:

Thanks dude! Thank you so much.

are the characters voice also your voice? they sound freaking good! you are going to be a very good voice actor someday, good luck!

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Piper responds:

Yep, they're all me. Thank you so much!! :)

The first couple seconds already amazed me. The fist voice reminded me of Ellie from The Last of Us, really enjoyed it keep up the good work!

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Piper responds:

Yay! That is so awesome. I haven't played The Last of Us, but if that first voice sounds like Ellie that would mean that - I , myself - sound like Ellie, all the time. Haha. Is that bad? I wonder...

VAC 11 Judge Review:

You sound like an alternative Tara Strong, I was reminded of that especially when you did that Seth voice. I laughed at how it immediately cut off at the end. Good plot, not too new but you still executed it with some twists and still made it funny. Your acting was also very good, the voices you did for the hall monitors made them sound like a dynamic duo of sorts, with Jade being a defining third voice. Perhaps the dynamic duo was also a negative point as the two sounded similar and had similar spunky personalities. To be critical, when Paige and Jade began all the business at the boy’s bathroom, I was just a little confused as to how Ms. Harvey was still there? Aside from that, the entirety of this entry was really quite well done. Simply the audio for a cartoon short. Excellent work!

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Piper responds:

Heheh. You know, I've been hearing that a lot, about the script not being very original. I wrote about seven other scripts and decided on this one sepcifically for its simplicity and originality hoping it would intrigue the audience, so these reports of sounding and seeming like other scripts has probably been the biggest blow for me, darn. Perhaps if I had made it a junior high school on Io, gave all of them alien names, made the hall pass an organic microchip, and had them hide in a fat man's belly button instead of the utility closet? lol. My biggest fear however, was having Paige and Seth sound too close to each other, despite my strenuous efforts here it seems my lack of ability and experience really showed in this situation. I will be sure to keep an ear out for too similar of nuances in the future. Thank you for all of your feedback. It was very helpful. I'll be sure to apply it to my future projects!

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4.26 / 5.00

Nov 15, 2013
5:16 PM EST
File Info
8.1 MB
5 min 54 sec

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