VAC 11 Judge Review:

It was a little awkward when the Ape Man appeared and I wasn’t sure what actions were going on as he grunted hahahahaha, but I assumed they were just stalking from a distance? I wasn’t sure who exactly appeared at the end to evacuate their guts or the other one with him. Nice grandpa character, but the others didn’t seem quite as defined as his. Great mixing and sound effects with some low ambient music. The plot was okay, but it seemed a little rushed for what it was. I would have liked to learn more about the feelings of these characters, maybe that contributes to why most of them didn’t seem as defined, since grandpa spoke the most. Overall, a good piece that I think needs more attention to character detail and some extra plot development. Good job!

Hey there. I liked your grandpa voice, kid voice and the ape man. You did a very good job at mixing and editing. The sound effects fit very well and add to the story rather than take away from it.

Other than that, seeing just how skilled you are, I would have really like a bit more emphasis on the acting portion of your project and a bit more time helping us get a bit more involved with the script. I feel that the story ended up suffering because of listener being led through the story a bit too quickly.

Either way, thank you so much for taking the time to share this with us. I hope that if you have a genuine interest in pursuing voice acting as something you'd seriously like to do that you'll continue. :)