VAC 11 Judge Review:
I liked your banter in the beginning and how natural it sounded. The mixing was obviously off as it sounded out of place with the ambient street noise. When your Indian accent came in at the end, strangely enough it was somewhat hard to distinguish from your normal voice. A little pitch variation with one or the other could have helped differentiate. Also, with that end part I felt there was much more potential for it to be hilarious. Instead, it was kind of dull to me, but I could tell what you were trying to do. So that plot point needed work, but the rest of it before he chokes worked well. I really love conciseness, so I commend you for that. Overall, you did a nice job. Maybe a little extra character development and plot development. But good work!