Well, as the first review, if you wish, of this particular track it is hard for me to make a fair and profound judgment as I have nobody else's opinion to compare my own too, so, I will be brief (hopefully). My immediate thoughts are that the piece is good (yay), but as always there is some criticism, to begin I would perhaps like to touch on the idea of mood and then pace, although this can be difficult as I do not know what mood you were trying to set and what the music is intended for, I felt that the mood was one of interest although it did not make me feel particularly emotive or moved at any point. Furthermore, we can discuss the pace and how this essentially did not feel as though it changed throughout the piece, the change in the central melody was nice, but the fact that the base essentially remained constant was what let it down. As in all my reviews, I try not to end on a negative note or one of overall criticism, so I will end by saying once more that it is astonishing what people create and post all the time, as usual, you (the creator) should be proud of what you have created and have had the courage to post for others to judge; congratulations!