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Author Comments

My Entry to the Voice acting contest! My first submission, sorry it's a bit rushed as only had half a day to do it as it's my only day off and full of cold so my vocal range is atrocious.

Anyways I hope you enjoy. Any constructive criticism is welcomed.

Bigs up to:
http://www.freesfx.co.uk : for some awesome sound effects

Special thanks to these awesome music meisters:
HalcyonicFalconX - Drag me to despair
Benjamin Tibbetts - Kitchen Theatre


VAC 11 Judge Review:

Good thing I read the pseudo-description, otherwise I wouldn’t have known it was in your mind. That explains why there was a lot of silence, the narratives must have mostly been going on in your head! Hahahahaha. The mixing was a huge problem because it was extremely difficult to understand what was being said. I immediately questioned who the two other characters were in reality as well as the location in reality. I understood the goblin humping his leg, but it sure didn’t sound like there was much trauma. Good vocal distinction between goblin and the main guy, but not much else interesting. The story was flat from what I could understand and the acting seemed quite dampened and unenthusiastic. I would first work on being able to sound as clear as possible first with your voice and then through help with the mixing. Also, think about a dialogue that’s got an even but quick pace and more clarity.

Jaggblade responds:

Thanks for reviewing. You've given me a few things to contemplate and improve on :D

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Credits & Info


2.64 / 5.00

Nov 13, 2013
3:33 PM EST
File Info
3.3 MB
3 min 40 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.