VAC 11 Judge Review:
Good thing I read the pseudo-description, otherwise I wouldn’t have known it was in your mind. That explains why there was a lot of silence, the narratives must have mostly been going on in your head! Hahahahaha. The mixing was a huge problem because it was extremely difficult to understand what was being said. I immediately questioned who the two other characters were in reality as well as the location in reality. I understood the goblin humping his leg, but it sure didn’t sound like there was much trauma. Good vocal distinction between goblin and the main guy, but not much else interesting. The story was flat from what I could understand and the acting seemed quite dampened and unenthusiastic. I would first work on being able to sound as clear as possible first with your voice and then through help with the mixing. Also, think about a dialogue that’s got an even but quick pace and more clarity.
Thanks for reviewing. You've given me a few things to contemplate and improve on :D