The piano in the beginning is very repetitive, but I think it gets a little better when the piano is finally switched up. The flow of this isn't too good either. I would suggest maybe trying to turn bits and pieces of this into a kind of relaxing bit. I could kind of see this as the start of a background track for some kind of game, but it needs a lot of work. Keep at it!
Really, one star? I usually don't complain about reviews but that seems a bit outlandish. Can't trust everyone I suppose