Very good opening.
Nice chord at 0:08.
Repetitive after 0:15; listener is bored. Skip to 0:30 quicker.
High note near 0:43 is too loud. Its good at 0:52 though.
Awkward melody at 1:05. Too fast?
I like 1:15's style.
Good string entrance near 1:28. Very emotional. Piano could be more emotional though.
1:55 sounds like an ending. ???
The ending is phenomenal. I wish the style was like so throughout 2:00 in and 3:00.
I know this is a picky review but I feel that you'd benefit from it.