VAC 11 Judge Review:
Guardian in my pocket!!! Hahahahaha! That’s my favorite part. Okay well, that was a strange story that I think I followed all the way through. You had distinct characters, but the rock changing dialects towards the end threw me off a bit; it seemed awkward to me. There were nice reverb effects to simulate the cave, but mixing with the voices could still use a little bit of work I think, especially in the beginning with that excess white noise and random cutoff. Your voice sounded a bit timid with most of the characters, I think you could have really projected and solidified their personas. The script I thought was a little weak, but it still had definable parts. I just thought some sentences went on a bit too long and that the humor was sort of weak. But overall, I thought this was an okay piece, I really liked your Jepht character. Nice job!
Thank you very much for the review. Hopefully the next time I'll be able to let myself project better, since I was a bit conscious of the neighbors at 3 am. haha, of course, that's no excuse. Admittedly, everything was rather rushed and I do wish I had put a little bit more time into perfecting everything, but I am very thankful for your criticism especially towards the weak points of the piece. I'll definitely keep them in mind for VAC 12. Thanks again! :)