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Tcaojat: B - Fiz

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Hey guys! This is my first time entering the Newgrounds Voice Acting Contest. I had fun putting this together, although I did make a few mistakes. It was hard to give my all since my only free recording time is at night when everyone at home is asleep, but hopefully you guys enjoy!

The great elder tells of Jepht and Tol's first adventure together in their quest to undo the destruction which was brought upon their village. Only wish wish dust, a heavenly dust that grants wishes and shit, can save their home from a greater impending doom.
Discovering that wish dust can be obtained by destroying a guardian, they seek out to find their dust.

Music by Incompetech
Sfx by soundbible

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VAC 11 Judge Review:

Guardian in my pocket!!! Hahahahaha! That’s my favorite part. Okay well, that was a strange story that I think I followed all the way through. You had distinct characters, but the rock changing dialects towards the end threw me off a bit; it seemed awkward to me. There were nice reverb effects to simulate the cave, but mixing with the voices could still use a little bit of work I think, especially in the beginning with that excess white noise and random cutoff. Your voice sounded a bit timid with most of the characters, I think you could have really projected and solidified their personas. The script I thought was a little weak, but it still had definable parts. I just thought some sentences went on a bit too long and that the humor was sort of weak. But overall, I thought this was an okay piece, I really liked your Jepht character. Nice job!

Mechassassin responds:

Thank you very much for the review. Hopefully the next time I'll be able to let myself project better, since I was a bit conscious of the neighbors at 3 am. haha, of course, that's no excuse. Admittedly, everything was rather rushed and I do wish I had put a little bit more time into perfecting everything, but I am very thankful for your criticism especially towards the weak points of the piece. I'll definitely keep them in mind for VAC 12. Thanks again! :)

Credits & Info

Waiting for 4 more votes

Nov 10, 2013
5:16 PM EST
File Info
7.6 MB
5 min 28 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.