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The One (WIP)

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I recorded this a week or so ago.. Def not my best but def not my worst.. Thought Id leave it at this for now.. If someone on NG has a beat that thinks would match these lyric let me know..Id always rather have my works spit with another underground collaborator..

Props to Shadowville productions for the beat!


One day it will become this ones day
One day the prey will prey on the snakes
But this day is not today
Cuz this day is a grave for this one

Verse 1:
When the shadow arrives its end times
All dies,nothing survives to their surmises
Stand up guys got no chance either,its feverish ways
like being locked in a cell with the keys thrown away
/Being given the boot, just for speaking the truth
Getting cracks in the tooth for having a ship that’s loose
Ruthlessness, ungodliness, and sacrifices
One, the other or all, whatever suffices
/Bad vices get one caught up or stopped up
Locked up, shot up or maybe brought up
Living lie, living to live, not one to forgive
Blows to the ribs or maybe stuck with a shiv
Havoc happens when ones not grasping
The facts to feel it, one get passed over then
They get landed an end, its a means to an end
Done in, ended for not being a friend

Verse 2:
Find yourself lost, lots of times fought
Not knowing why, why foulness flocks
Waking up thinking its a new, but who knew
That its not a new, who knew it would ensue
Wondering why blunderings keep overcoming
Looking in the mirror, shed a tear and then grumbling
Comes from the gut, scabs from freeze the blood
Wasn't we cool, thought it was brotherly love
being a rug, stepped upon, on and on
again and again, an agent aging, one not done
one that’s got fortitude, the sort of dude
that’s stand-up and one to do whats not afforded to
being mistaken as one who's flaking
when this one is one who's always creating
being blatant, talking up when its pivotal
nows this ones at his funeral and it miserable

Verse 3:
fighting for a way out, but losing the bout
about out of strength, starting to catch the clout
not screaming ouch, but screaming out
not knowing why those around not helping out
/fighting and upward battle, battling but breaking
being casted out, in a frustrating situation
needing medication, mentally weakened
broken down, and also physically beaten
/been seen as a mule is this ones rule
only good at taking orders, a drowning fool
a drone, a clone, one with little expression
this one is one who knows no feeling, but then
/the one time this one steps out of order
he gets beaten down for being a being, put in a morgue
deferred and deterred from making a meaning
this one wanted more, life he was fiending


whats crackin, I wasn't sure about the hook at the start, till I got into it.. now im def enjoyin it. I like that sound you are recordin with in this, it got that grittier sound, I dunno if that's intentional or not, but it def works- overall im digging the feeling of the track, it was def a nice listen to me, so thanks for uploading it .

KlazikNadi responds:

yea i was skeptic about the hook, but after some time i thought it was good enough for now... yea this is prolly one of my grittier tracks. thanks for stopping by! i cant wait to get another collab going and to get to recording more consistently!

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4.89 / 5.00

Nov 9, 2013
9:46 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
10.2 MB
4 min 29 sec

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