Cool!

Catchy deep beat, good choice and use of "instruments". Good concept as well!

Needs some spice tho. Still great work!

5ives.

Pretty nice actually.

The piece itself is pretty decent. Now all that's left to do is work a little on the volume level of each instruments. The cymbals that you use at the beginning of the song are a bit too loud and repetitive. The first synths weren't to my liking but that's just a matter of taste and taste can't really be discussed :D

I really liked that part in the middle where it seemed to slow down tempo wise, and i also loved the big build up for the ending part of your song.

I don't recall hearing any snares in this piece, only that loud cymbal. So snares would be nice. I know how it is though, i am one to have problems when it comes to percussions... but everything can be learned by practicing. Now don't get me wrong, i'm not saying that your drums are bad but only that they need a little more work.

This piece in it's general aspect and concept was pretty good, and so i give you a 4 on this track.

Now onto the next song.