You've got a good sound going on here, but it's too repetitive and predictable. If you want a progressive sound, you should try modifying a riff on each repetition, maybe even add or remove a note to displace the rhythm.
Was not expecting the relaxing intro to switch to being so heavy all of a sudden haha. Love the fast transitions, makes a short song actually feel finished and complete especially when there are so many. This one I actually do have a complaint. When the drums come in for the first time, they seem to be overpowering the song a little too much, but perhaps it's just my headphones. The rest of the song is great in my idea and I love the second transition where you bring in the guitar from the intro again. Kind of reminds me of Linkin Park a little bit. Awesome song.
It's almost the same in the end as the outro, but it's a bit different. I suppose you could be right about the whole over powered drums. It's just something I pushed out quick to go against fire118. We're having a djentoff :)
Check his stuff too! It's pretty awesome! Far better than mine!
lol its on! In progress right now!
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