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Using more piano in my works, Loving the results. I had almost forgotten what filters can do for a song, so in this one I refreshed my memories. Tell me what you think.

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Pretty Decent!

First of all, fantastic chords and chord progressions! Very nice relaxing intro, really love that piano, everything seems to come in really smoothly and sounds really clean, a small notice on the kick, which sounds distorted, maybe it's too much compressed and it dries things up. Second notice, at 0:45, when the main thing comes in, the bass is really missing from there so it sounds very monotone and doesn't help the awesome melodies much, it could be filled in with some offbeat bass for example, something dry and simple, i think something complex would ruin it. The melody is fixing things up though, at 1:00 the breakdown part really sounds very good, and the effects you applied there really sound joyful! :D Well then you add many variations to the melody, that was a really smart thing to do, it took much time and was variable, well after that the piano comes in again at about 2:14 as a solo part, and variates of course, would use some more drums there though it sounds kind of empty. Then the violins coming in really happily, Well i cannot describe it exactly but it's really beautiful, If you wanted to make the song cheered up and uplifting you've really done it well!
3:33 - Woahhh, that was wicked awesome, can't describe it, apart from the notices about the kick i cannot find something bad there haha, really nice!!! and until the finale really awesome! slowly fading out, :D

All in all, it is a very well structured song, a very clean and good mastered song, It's just some spots that need more filling, to the bass more specifically, and some other empty spots and solo's that the duration was really long

And another small notice is the repetitiveness, well actually that's not a bad thing if you wanted to make your song enjoyable, since it was relaxed people would like to listen to more and more, even if it is being looped many times, I guess repetitiveness is from the spots that sound a little empty, and it's not a bad thing after all

Nice work!
Technoplasmatic / TastyTeo

Niiice! Do more!

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Nov 7, 2013
7:03 PM EST
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9.1 MB
4 min 58 sec

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