VAC 11 Judge Review:
I love the use of honey by the couple all the time, makes me feel awkward heheheheheheh. Anyways, you made some cool characters that I sometimes got confused about because their ranges were kind of similar; they could perhaps use some work. Nice use of effects and reverb to make everything sound like it was in the same space. The big problem I had with this was that the pacing was just so slow. I think this was due in part to the writing, which I found kind of dull. It was predictable, so when some lines were dragged on for dramatic effect, I didn’t really feel the point of it. Even if the lines were a bit faster paced as is, I would feel like the story was more engaging. There was a lot of silence as well. So overall, this piece had great technicality, it just needed work with some acting and most importantly plot. But nice job!