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Uploaded
Nov 6, 2013 | 12:36 AM EST
File Info
Voice
6.3 MB
5 min 30 sec
Score
3.26 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.26 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
730 Plays | 22 Downloads
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Genres:
Voice Acting - Spoken Word
Tags:
11
myfirst
vac

Author Comments

A newlywed couple are off to spend their first night together as husband and wife when they find their dream honeymoon spot is a little on the spooky side. Things take a turn for the worse when the resort's first dinner party doesn't quite go according to plan...

Reviews


ZipZipperZipZipper

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

VAC 11 Judge Review:

I love the use of honey by the couple all the time, makes me feel awkward heheheheheheh. Anyways, you made some cool characters that I sometimes got confused about because their ranges were kind of similar; they could perhaps use some work. Nice use of effects and reverb to make everything sound like it was in the same space. The big problem I had with this was that the pacing was just so slow. I think this was due in part to the writing, which I found kind of dull. It was predictable, so when some lines were dragged on for dramatic effect, I didn’t really feel the point of it. Even if the lines were a bit faster paced as is, I would feel like the story was more engaging. There was a lot of silence as well. So overall, this piece had great technicality, it just needed work with some acting and most importantly plot. But nice job!


chevronrock responds:

Thanks Zip, I agree with all of your points and appreciate the feedback. Until next time...!


grhmhmltngrhmhmltn

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Did you make the atmospheric sounds yourself? By blowing into the mic, and going "hoo hoo"? If so, your resourcefulness is impressive :p



ecopper12ecopper12

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices, but I feel like the woman of the couple could have sounded a bit more...Feminine. xD Other than that, great job! Good luck!


chevronrock responds:

Ha, thanks... Tried to channel some Dr. Girlfriend for Mrs Smith... Hearing her voice in Venture Bros cracks me up every time...