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VAC 11 Entry - chevron

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A newlywed couple are off to spend their first night together as husband and wife when they find their dream honeymoon spot is a little on the spooky side. Things take a turn for the worse when the resort's first dinner party doesn't quite go according to plan...

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VAC 11 Judge Review:

I love the use of honey by the couple all the time, makes me feel awkward heheheheheheh. Anyways, you made some cool characters that I sometimes got confused about because their ranges were kind of similar; they could perhaps use some work. Nice use of effects and reverb to make everything sound like it was in the same space. The big problem I had with this was that the pacing was just so slow. I think this was due in part to the writing, which I found kind of dull. It was predictable, so when some lines were dragged on for dramatic effect, I didn’t really feel the point of it. Even if the lines were a bit faster paced as is, I would feel like the story was more engaging. There was a lot of silence as well. So overall, this piece had great technicality, it just needed work with some acting and most importantly plot. But nice job!

chevronrock responds:

Thanks Zip, I agree with all of your points and appreciate the feedback. Until next time...!

Did you make the atmospheric sounds yourself? By blowing into the mic, and going "hoo hoo"? If so, your resourcefulness is impressive :p

Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices, but I feel like the woman of the couple could have sounded a bit more...Feminine. xD Other than that, great job! Good luck!

chevronrock responds:

Ha, thanks... Tried to channel some Dr. Girlfriend for Mrs Smith... Hearing her voice in Venture Bros cracks me up every time...

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Nov 6, 2013
12:36 AM EST
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Spoken Word
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5 min 30 sec
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