I love how unassuming the intro is, like, "Meh, this might be okay.", but then BAM, RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
The main riff was simple, but in my opinion, primal and driving. Which is exactly what you want in metal. My only real complaint here: It was not long enough! I was expecting a full song (not seeing the length of time it was) and was disappointed when, right when I thought it was the middle of the song, it ended.
Extend the song, add a little bit, and you'll have a serious metal hit!
damn dude. That intro had me unfazed until the sound was getting fucked with, then I was interested. Then the song really kicked in and I really like what I heard. Cool metal riffage and fantastic voice.
That's all it is tho, just badass riffage and a great metal voice. Not saying it's a bad thing, it's just a short piece.
Thank you. And thanks for the feedback. I'd definitely agree that I need to challenge myself a bit more in terms of song length, structure and diversity.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.