Strong subbass which is a key element in Trap music, The lead at the start seems kinda blurry and not much clarity, perhaps some EQing at around 9 - 11kHz to give it a bit more definition.
It was very loud which isn't a problem but it did sound like its clipping im afraid :(, Not sure if you used a maximiser abit harshly to get it that loud?
Soldier on though man! can't get better without trying!