VAC 11 Judge Review:
Nicely done. A fairly humorous story with a clear beginning, middle, and end. The vocal variation between characters was well done and there was a fair amount of sound effects to keep the story intact. The big problem is the mixing, it was garbled and there were some pops with your breath. It’s good to be careful of what you’re doing with your mouth and your air as you’re recording so that extraneous noise isn’t accidentally made. Other than the technical difficulty, your submission was pretty good. I liked how your main character did not sound like a main character and I liked how you were able to say everything that needed to be said in a concise amount of time. Good work!