good i like it...
wow, much better than my first song on Fl. your doing great. Soon you'll be a pro. Come check out my stuff please!
Very nice for a first go at it.
-Seems you have a basic grasp of mixing the sounds together to form a rhythm.
-You're taking it slowly, and not rushing it
Repetitive, needs to be more diverse
Try experimenting a bit more. I don't have FL, but I'm sure there are more tools.
All in all, you got some skill. Keep workin at it, and if you need help, ask some of the vets around here. I'm sure they could lend a hand.