I really quite like what you did with this one with regards to the unique melody and feel. Though in general, I've never been really impressed by vocals or dialogue of any sort. Thats about the only thing I have to complain about this one, though maybe I have poor taste in vocal elements.
Otherwise, its a catchy tune, I feel the dialogues can take away from the immersion just a bit, it doesn't flow, the dialogues can't be anticipated and kind of surprise the listener from the tune. Perhapes use some elements that lead up to the dialogue so as to make it more seamless and to remove any sort of anticipation. Hopefully that makes sense I know I'm not the most articulate.
I'd be curious to hear a version with the dialogues taken out, I feel the title alone speakes what needs to be spoken for the music.
Give your opinions people! Let me know if I'm on crack thx!
Yeah, this is my first time ever incorporating any foreign sounds of any kind into a song of mine, so I'm still new to it. I wanted to experiment with a speech, and thought I'd give it a try in this song. I also might just make a version without the speaking so that you curious people can hear it and also so it can be used for movies and stuff.
Thanks for the review!