BMario performs his first hit as new competition threatens Bowser and his accomplices business. There's no sound FX, a sprinkling of music and no continuity. No original characters and a plot covered in holes. This is basically the worst thing ever, covered in dung, old dung and then thrown in a pile of manure. It's dungy. Oh, and its my VA contest entry, so grab some dungarees cause my entry is dung. Dung x
VAC 11 Judge Review:
So, Mario and Luigi sounded exactly the same. There was really no writing here, I had no perception of what the story was. I mean, I guess this was all recorded in one take. And I lost track of what anyone was saying really quick. You said your entry is dung, so I guess that’s it.
Merry Christmas prety boi xox
Great job, fellow entrant! I think the voices could have been a bit more different from each other, and the accent could use a bit of work. The quality was nice and clear, so that's a good thing. xD But other than that, it was still nice to hear. Good luck!
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