This is the first time I've heard you rap, but you got good delivery, good flow, and good lyrics. It's a shame that you're just going to be producing now
Your words are very much appreciated!
Id like to clarify that although I wont be as consistent in raps before, I will still be releasing them occasionally.
dope! the first guys voice sounds kinda like awol one from shapeshifters. the second verse is tight and very smart. this is my kinda stuff. the only thing I would say for constructive criticism is maybe make a hook? that would just be the icing on the cake u know?
other than that, great track dude I like this beat
Oh yeah dude, I feel ya on the hook thing, is the missing link between the verses.
Thanks for the listen and the feedback, glad to know you dig it, haha.
Not familiar with the Shapeshifters but imma check em out and tell you what I thought.
That first dude is one of my friends known as Great White, hes dope as hell.
word man well spit.
Much appreciated dude
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.