I like the flow you got going. You got the idea right... But in my opinion, the piano is a bit flat. Add some reverb and more diversity to the drums. More breaks, kick ins, kick outs, ETC.
Nice one. The beat is catchy and well mixed. There's a nice shaker type of sound I here from time to time, I'm not sure why it continues on at the end though.
The bass is simple, but it does the job.
Nice piano riff and some interesting fx in the mix.
I'll be interested to see how you develop at hiphop.
Think man..But im new at this beat making thing and im working hard on it..but i still dont know every thing i need to know about but im getting there...but thanks for tha good feed back..p.s check out my first one if you liked this one..it call tha new south
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.