VAC 11 Judge Review:

Was dad driving some heavy duty all-terrain vehicle? LOL. You sure do like musical interludes, I think that added some unnecessary time. I think some of the voices were inconsistent; they sounded a little different after each transition so sometimes I forgot I was listening to a previous character already introduced. The story was okay, I thought it was weak for suddenly copping out at the end with happy brownies. There was no full circle with getting his first cell phone, it just darted in other directions; I thought dad would be foreshadowing the rest of the story. Character variation was pretty good and the mixing was great as well. But I thought the acting was kind of dry actually, it sounded more like you were reading your lines and less like you were acting them. Overall, I think this is a solid story with some good characters, but there was a lack of creativity, for me.

I really enjoyed your sound effects and the mixing. The voices you used were very well done, although I did feel like they did suffer from being a bit more similar than different in terms of speaking patterns and tone. They would have done very well on their own but together they were a bit disorienting which took away from the experience, you know what I mean?

Anyway. Good job, and thank you for sharing this with us. :)

Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices a lot, but they could do to be bit different from each other. I could kind of tell that it was the same person doing a different pitched voice, and that ideally should be avoided in Voice Acting. Nice job, though! Good luck!