It's a tad too simple.
The drums are ok, but it's lacking melody in here.
Since, it's your first attempt I'll give it 2.5 stars
This is my first attempt at a not Hip-Hop instrumental, really. All my other attempts turned into Hip-Hop and this is pretty much there. Let me know what you think, I'm gonna be uploading more!
It's a tad too simple.
The drums are ok, but it's lacking melody in here.
Since, it's your first attempt I'll give it 2.5 stars
Its all about progression, friend.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.