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This was suposed to be instrumental, but then my stupid lil brother put his voice over it.



just plain sucks.

Dawei responds:

i know, right, it was horrible, i hated it, but i can't submit the stuff on my album because they might think i stole it.

NG isn't a dump


Sorry, but anybody with half a brain could figure out that this is you singing. It's not your brother because if what you said is true then something doesnt add up. You said that you first recorded this right? And then your brother came and "ruined it"? I dont think so. Why does the guitar stop playing in the the part of the song where there are just vocals, and then the voice quiets down when the "heavier" playing happens? It was meant to happen like that, that's why. I could keep going... Why are the vocals so quiet? Not because your younger brother did it, its because your sitting on a chair away from your microphone because the microphone is sitting next to your amp.

Lastly, you should understand that NG is not a place to throw random garble in hopes that you would fulfill your fantasy of someone labelling you a musician.

Am I upset? Yes, and I think I have plenty of evidence to justify my position.


Dawei responds:

right, of course it was me, when i sing i have a stand for my mic. it get's quiet at one part because i was going to add my vocals there, but when i went to take a dump, my brother came in and, since he's a stupid loser, of course he didn't know how to use the equitment. the only reason i didn't explain that early was because i didn't have enough room to right it in the desription. the reason i didn't take his vocals off was because when i did it, i lost all the music. this was like two years ago, before i started taking lessons, and i assure you, i fi performed this at my concert a couple days ago, there wouldn't have been all those people stuffed in to that small room. if you don't think this is good, check my bill cosby parodies, loser.

Work a bit harder

Guitar sounds out of tune and completely random. No structure as far as a "riff" or a "pattern". Vocals incomprehensible (but i did read this was an accident, so you are forgiven). Work harder to create guitar riffs that are more creative, even simple lines can have great effect. Unless you were going for an avant-garde noise shizl sort of thing, this probably is not going to rate up as your best work. Keep trying, if you have problems with anything i can always help.


Dawei responds:

i made this 2 years ago. trust me, it's not my best, that was a horrible thing and i just like putting my horrible stuff on here, than i'll put my ACTUAL stuff on here. i mean, i have a band so i would be embarassed if i went out with a guitar playing like this and singing so softly like my then 10 year old brother. no one would like my band at all!!!!!!!! thanks anyways

it doesent sound appealing....

i know that your brother put his voice over it....what what he saying anyways? anyways at least you tried right?

Dawei responds:

wha do you mean? he took one of my songs my friend wrote for my band and sang them, called all you kings and queens, i think he stole the lyrics afterwards though, cause i can't find em

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Credits & Info


Jul 10, 2006
7:56 PM EDT
File Info
3.8 MB
4 min 10 sec
1.50 / 5.00

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