I teared up. Brilliant instrumental work, phenomenal singing. An amazing song. *thumbs up*
you have strong potential as a vocalist, but you'll need to hone a melody down and have it, like, memorized, to really shine.
You should relearn these lyrics, and like, practice doing it the same way a few more times and then do a REAL take. I would like to hear it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.