No fucking way. You made that loop into an incredible song. Loving the variations.
When that snare comes in, the feel I get is this wicked heaviness, like I'm listening to death sludge. That is the most emotional part of the song for me. To elaborate, I get that euphoric hyped feeling I get when listening to a fucking awesome metal riff. In fact it reminds me of some of the metal I've written.
Epic piece, awesome feel.
Thanks man :D I'm glad you're digging this stuff, I've got a couple in this vein that I haven't gotten around to finishing- maybe this'll motivate me
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.